thumbnail+linework+marker... *updated*

[sandrue]

as i've been looking at feng's work (for the 1000th time:) ) for inspiration, indeed i found some... here's what came out:

the thumbnail
http://img17.photobucket.com/albums/v50/sandrue/soldier.jpg

the linework
http://img17.photobucket.com/albums/v50/sandrue/soldier_line.jpg

and finally, markered it up...
http://img17.photobucket.com/albums/v50/sandrue/soldier_marker.jpg

the sketch is much more looser than my usual work, a quick sketch more likely, taken about under an hour to do the whole work...

sorry for poor quality, the scanner messed up:confused:

anyway, c&c are welcome indeed...:chug:

[Bradart]

sweet

[young paddy1]

big pointy thing, check
large gun, check
battle suit, check
I see little wrong with the sketch

[jadedchron]

Looks cool to me :)

[Zeb]

The head is a bit small for the body, and also appears to be a bit on the smoooshed side.

Cool sketch, love the markers...

Out.

[sandrue]

i'm more satisfied with the head in the thumbnail version; why i've divided the helmet into two, i do not know:bash:

also, some of the proprotions are a bit exegerated(spelled right?:confused: ) the hands and feet are very large, the head is smaller than appropriate; tried to give some manga-ish feeling to it...

i think the torso part is a bit off-perspective

anyways, i feel satisfied that finally i'm able to come up with some thumbnails worthy of developing...

thanks a lot for comments:chug:

[Emptypants]

Alot of his parts look FLAT ...

Like his helmet, hands, torso, legs, gun. Everythings either straight on, or profile. With the exception of his shoulders, but the perspective is off on those.

:dorky:

[sandrue]

http://img17.photobucket.com/albums/v50/sandrue/soldat.jpg

hey, i've added more marker value, tried to give some sense of depth, left some areas untouched though(mostly the gun) because i'm not sure about the details. thanks for crit.:)