Sand Devil

[Tenelaus]

Crits would be greatly appreciated =)
http://www.piratesarrus.co.uk/Preacher.jpg
Cheers

[Tiava]

wow, thats a piece!

the only thing i´ve got to crit is that it is a bit unclear, because the colors look all the same.

[Blackarts]

I love crazy lovecraftian monsters like this...reminds me a bit of hellboy.

- I'm a little uncleat as to how this creature supports itself...it looks like it would be unbalanced a bit and tipping towards the skulls.
-the creature's left eye seems squashed against his skull...but I could buy that he's just a deformed and twisted beast.
-I agree with the above post re: color variation....a little bit - especially in the creature's skin would help a lot, and pop him from the BG.
-The skulls could use a bit of work to make them look more like skulls...also if they were a bit smaller it would make the creature more menacing.
-The ground could use some texture...small rocks, anything to break it up a bit.

hope that helps!

-D-

[keyth]

this sucker is in need of color variation out the wazzoo. it looks like it has potential but the only thing is....i can't really "understand" what is going on structurally with the creature. i would enlarge the canvas and give the viewer a greater sense of the architecture.

[Tenelaus]

Thanks for all the comments :), I'll go over it a bit more with this advice.