Gunman Doodle

[Idiot Apathy]

Right allo allo, been awhile since I've posted... anywhere, even the dsg. Here is a doodle in painter8 that took me about an hour. I've found myself working in black and white alot lately, subconsciously learning about contrast I guess...

Right, tell me what's good, what's bad, and what kind of jello is the best, as long as you say it's green jello.


http://img3.photobucket.com/albums/v13/Ragnarok27/6.jpg

Adios ~ The idiot.

[corky13]

Well i think you captured the idea of movement quite good but i can see some major problems with the anatomy (ecspecially the arms) And the Pistols ara also looking a bit off...

[shortmikeshort]

It looks cartoony. As a cartoonist, I like that. Ditto with the capturing motion.

The guns are off. First, raise the muzzle flare on the lower gun. It's coming out the middle whereas the barrel exit is actually closer to the top. Second, loosen up the pose on the guns. They'd be kicking mighty bad right about now, so he wouldn't be able to hold them so perfectly straight. Third, get some refs. I don't like generic guns.

And green jello is the best.

[Idiot Apathy]

Thanks for responding Corky.

Aye the arms and shoulders I definetly see a problem with, what else anatomy wise? I should really start out with a sketch har har.

And yeah, I was lax with the pistols, shame on me I'm a firearm hobbyist.

[Idiot Apathy]

Originally posted by shortmikeshort
It looks cartoony. As a cartoonist, I like that. Ditto with the capturing motion.

The guns are off. First, raise the muzzle flare on the lower gun. It's coming out the middle whereas the barrel exit is actually closer to the top. Second, loosen up the pose on the guns. They'd be kicking mighty bad right about now, so he wouldn't be able to hold them so perfectly straight. Third, get some refs. I don't like generic guns.

And green jello is the best.

Thanks, shortmikeshort.

Ah crud, thats what I get for making him shoot after I had everything else done, I completely forgot about recoil.

And what a shame to have generic looking guns, I have plenty of ref's in real life :/ .

Yup, the muzzle flair was just a result of my laziness.

Me thinks I should have doubled the time I spent and used another hour to think through this more thoroughly. Think first, paint next... *smacks head*

Thanks again, ~The idiot.