Huge three week update!!!

[I.was.ink]

Heres two pieces I did last week. first one is 10 minutes and the second is 12 minutes. PLEASE tell me what u think and I have a lot more to show. I'll put them in later tonight.
http://iwasink.tripod.com/mark

oh yeah, I did these with conte on newsprint.

[I.was.ink]

c'mon give me some feed back! 15 people have looked at my post but yet no one says a thing. I'll post some more pics, but at least give me an "o.k" or "it sucks". something!!:mad:

[I.was.ink]

Allright here come like 10 pics. please give me some C & C!!!:)
http://iwasink.tripod.com/1 min.
these were done in one minute

http://iwasink.tripod.com/2
these were also done in one minute

http://iwasink.tripod.com/action_man
2 minutes

http://iwasink.tripod.com/anthony_sits
15 minutes

http://iwasink.tripod.com/anthony_torso
15 minutes

http://iwasink.tripod.com/mark_lying
25 minutes. this one of my favorite drawings i have ever done!

http://iwasink.tripod.com/s_back
15 minutes

http://iwasink.tripod.com/s_legs
10 minutes

http://iwasink.tripod.com/s_face


NOW PLEASE SAY SOMETHING!!!:)

I'm giving it my all and want to share, but no one says anything everyone just looks but doesn't reply. we should at least say something!!!

[I.was.ink]

sorry for the pics being so big. i don't know how to make them look smaller. they're like 3-4". but when I post em they look huge. oh well:( :confused: :(

[I.was.ink]

i know u can't see em right now cause stupid tripod says that too much bandwidth has been used. it says that they'll be available in 2 hrs. please check back later though:(

Does anyone know another host site that doesn't have a bandwidth limit and is free other than tripod. All i need to do is upload, thanks!:D

[jester]

Try to scan them just with 72 dpi (or 96 dpi) and to safe them as jpegs with 80-90% quality - works most times for me.

Jester

[Tedsuo]

Dude, 15 page views is waaaaay to soon to be getting so uppity. Yah needs to calm down. Post it and they will come.

As for comments, the first two are a little odd. The rest are coming along well. You've really got good gesture skills, and your rendering on the longer ones is really nice. You need to study anatomy and form more. Your 25 min pose is really nice (I especially like the face) but you broke his forearm. On the one below it it looks like he has three left scapulas. Memorize your bones and muscles and you'll really be able to put those rendering skills to work.

[littlejohn]

I like the fluidity of the line in these. My advice would be to find things you think you're bad at and work on them. I notice you take it easy on the hands and feet; maybe you could spend some more effort there. Sometimes, drawing a face in the middle of life drawing can be challenging; seems like you might try more of those, too.

[I.was.ink]

all right here's my update. Some of the pics up there were to big and sorry for getting so uppity. So heres the new batch, and if u want to know how long some of them are just post here and i'll specify. They mainly range from 1 min. - 15 min.

but about 90% of them are 1 or 2 mins

C & C please

http://iwasink.tripod.com/gesture_1

http://iwasink.tripod.com/gesture_2

http://iwasink.tripod.com/gesture_3

http://iwasink.tripod.com/gesture_4

http://iwasink.tripod.com/leslie_back

http://iwasink.tripod.com/leslie_bent_over

http://iwasink.tripod.com/leslie_bent_over_2

http://iwasink.tripod.com/leslie_body

http://iwasink.tripod.com/leslie_torso

http://iwasink.tripod.com/mark_wide

http://iwasink.tripod.com/rays_chest

http://iwasink.tripod.com/rays_chest_2

http://iwasink.tripod.com/rays_chest_3

http://iwasink.tripod.com/rays_chest_4

http://iwasink.tripod.com/rays_torso

http://iwasink.tripod.com/shirleys_torso

http://iwasink.tripod.com/torso_1

oh and if u can't see them its cause too many people saw them already and because my host is tripod, after they get viewed a certain amount, they can't be viewed for like 2 hrs. Sorry for that

but please check back if this happens

[ilex]

well i really love your linework. i especially like the pieces that are like busts... they're very interesting to look at... kinda creepy...

the 2nd one from the top (in your latest post) seems to have an upside down foot? your proportions seem to be off in a few of them (the 5th in your latest post)... maybe you are taking your eye off the model too much?

the 25 minute one that you love is very nice... his face and neck are beautiful and your line work is really nice too..the space from his waste to his ribcage seems too long and that arm looks really weird but i'm getting a break in the image so i can't tell if that's why...

nice work!