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dinfet
March 13th, 2004, 07:57 PM
Looking to further this idea to make it more interesting, crits welcome, so let me know what you think
http://shekinah.orcon.net.nz/images/watercityweb.jpg
Nadim
March 14th, 2004, 03:27 AM
Dig the concept - I may suggest
-More wider overview and underwater perspectives will show more of your city
-add some "people - creatures - whatever you like" doing different activities
-Reconsider the existing blue scale - also add more colours
-Add details
-more contrast
-good luck
Emptypants
March 14th, 2004, 03:50 AM
king has really good points. Think of your composition, we see too much water, and not enough of the idea. And why is that one building cut off?
Goodluck
nevershotdown
March 14th, 2004, 08:44 AM
i think it looks cool! maybe you should have roads or highways connecting the city all together.
DragonGX
March 14th, 2004, 03:01 PM
Check your perspecitve.
dinfet
March 14th, 2004, 11:18 PM
Thanks for the advice, I will continue with this idea and will try to post a final or close to final piece
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