Inspiration of flight

[Henry Pashkov]

Generally it is mine the first picture completely executed in Photoshop.

http://www.gpashkov.hotbox.ru/burevestnik-640.jpg

[J.Mac]

looks good overall i think i would just add more contrast to the closet bird to help give a great feeling of depth. maybe some more atmospheric perspective would be good. nice job!

-Jesse

[mos667]

Looks pretty good, considering I personally suck at the photoshop. I think there needs to be more variation, but since it sounds like it's for fun, I don't think it needs any touching up.

[fredflickstone]

It may not seem like much now, but give the edges of the clouds more of a dance-like quality to them too, much like the grace of teh birds. The clouds will mirror the birds feelings and give an overall balance to the image. THe birds are handled beautifully. Very nice feeling overall.

Ron

[sparky | emily]

I don't like that those two birds at the bottom are pretty much in the exact same position at the same level. It makes it look cloned, even though it isn't.

Other than that, looks good, I like the way light comes through the feathers.

[Henry Pashkov]

Thank, that among your responses is also positive.