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[barsoom]

a book cover. The author was very specific about the image he wanted for it. I would really appreciate any feedback you may have(positive or negative.) Thanks.

http://img31.photobucket.com/albums/v92/Cydonia/TORN.jpg

[jilted_one]

Hey the colours give the form and it looks pretty good from where i sit or stand (which ever the case.) My only crit would be that you could have given more emphasis on the main character and maybe also the thunder.

[fukifino]

I like the lighting, but my only comment is that with the amount of wind and rain implied here, I think he should be hunched over a little more. A little bit of "leaning into the wind."

Also, as a book cover, where's the text going to go? Hopefully not up top, as it'll cut off his head.

[barsoom]

jilted_one: Thanks for stopping by and commenting! I agree, the man could use some more detail to add additional emphasis. Although I don't know if I want to put much more emphasis on the lightning as my eye is already drawn to it.

fukifino: To show him leaning into the wind a bit is a great idea, thank you. I'll definitely try to implement that change and repost. As for the text, it's going to be at the very bottom, below the image you see here.(the black border won't be part of the cover when it goes to print)

[artistanbul]

coats backside could be blowing more. exagarration would be nice IMO. and leaning forward would be nice. and, some shining along the road would be good. Its wet you know.