figure drawings (update april 3)

[Auguste]

hello, guys....

this is my first post......

i hope u guys can give me some help with my works....

i appreciate that.....


http://img36.photobucket.com/albums/v110/auguste288/life1.jpg
http://img36.photobucket.com/albums/v110/auguste288/life2.jpg
http://img36.photobucket.com/albums/v110/auguste288/life3.jpg
http://img36.photobucket.com/albums/v110/auguste288/life4.jpg



critiques plz....:D

[Auguste]

:D some more....


http://img36.photobucket.com/albums/v110/auguste288/optional1.jpg
http://img36.photobucket.com/albums/v110/auguste288/optional2.jpg
http://img36.photobucket.com/albums/v110/auguste288/optional3.jpg

[David]

These are great! They have beautiful structure.

David

[andres_pad]

these are great dude! just now begin to refine, refine, refine. This is truly some beautiful art and i'd love to see some of your finished work.:)

[TheBlasianOne]

very nice sense of structure and depth here, good job. also i love your line quality, it's very elegant and confident

[fredflickstone]

great lines and rhythms. They all, except the last page have a consistent proportion error. The heads are either too big or too small with the body. The last page looks closer to accurate. This is something to keep in mind when doing more of the studies.


Like I said again, you have great lines and the gestures are so natural looking, rhythm that is. Keep moving forward, and draw as much as you can. These are nice. And if you can, get a chance to draw longer drawings than just quick sketchs. Quick drawings may eventually breed bad habits that only long drawings can rectify.


Good luck and keep posting your progress.


Ron

[Auguste]

Thanks guys;)


Ron:
sorry, i don't understand. you said the last page have proportion error, but closer to accurate?


I have heard something like u said, Quick drawings may eventually breed bad habits that only long drawings can rectify. and i m worried about that happen to me, becuase I m going to an animation school, in which a lot of students got the problem doing loger drawing.(I think.)

before that day comes, I will try to do some more longer studies. and think you for the advice.

[Auguste]

some new stuff.....
http://img36.photobucket.com/albums/v110/auguste288/DSC01135s.jpg
http://img36.photobucket.com/albums/v110/auguste288/DSC01122s.jpg
http://img36.photobucket.com/albums/v110/auguste288/DSC01154s.jpg
http://img36.photobucket.com/albums/v110/auguste288/DSC01173s.jpg
http://img36.photobucket.com/albums/v110/auguste288/DSC01176s.jpg
http://img36.photobucket.com/albums/v110/auguste288/DSC01181s.jpg
http://img36.photobucket.com/albums/v110/auguste288/DSC01182s.jpg
http://img36.photobucket.com/albums/v110/auguste288/DSC01210s.jpg
http://img36.photobucket.com/albums/v110/auguste288/DSC01224s.jpg
more critiques plz....