Some "art"

[corky13]

Hi
Im David and im 17 years old and i draw most of my works in shool....dont know why...maybe i need a bit chaos around myself...

welll...this is a Charakter Conzept done for a ModProject. Take me abaut 5 Hours to finish it...maybe i would be faster with a light table so i dont have so much to erase...mechanical pencil drawing on A4 sized copypaper
Tribuness (http://space.arcor.de/corky13)


This was done for an german Art Contest. Its my very first digital coloristation. Done in the Gimp with a mouse..maybe i redo it ^^. Took abaut 10 Hours


Heres the original Penciol Work for the Image above...all done with a mechanical pencil on a A4 copypaper ^^
Pencilwork (http://home.arcor.de/corky13/Arcanfinal.jpg)

Hope you like my work even if its much worser than the great Images ive seen in this Forums......

cyahttp://home.arcor.de/corky13/PGG.jpg

[corky13]

well 60 views and no reply....well maybe im not worth to ask for some comments and crits in your illustred round of generous artists :rolleyes: :D

[nikia]

Don't feel bad corky13. I've been here a long time and I usually get around 500 views and 1 or 2 comments if I'm lucky. Be patient, they'll probably comment on this one. It's the type of stuff they like.:D

My crit?. I think your colors of the different areas blend together to much. It's kind of hard to see where the creature ends and the man's clothing begins. Same for the background color. I think the creature needs some more shading and highlighting, something to make it stand out away from the man and the wall behind it. Possibly even a different color. Pretty cool though, I like the man's outfit. Good luck with it.:)

[hoopa]

I agree with the colour comment. The colour scheme is too close together. Like the man, esspecially his left gun, but the perspective on the right one seems a bit off. Still, if u coloured this with a mouse, then good job.

[corky13]

Thank you nikia and hoopa ;)

Yeah colors are a bit odd...but im trying to improve my skills...

Any comments or crits on the Tribuness ? Cause this is a more recent work (a month old...the other images are much older...abaut 2 months if i remember right o_O )

[Boris]

Why is it that people always beg for replies and comments? I mean - post a pic - then wait - eventually someone will answer ... maybe.
But dont say "oh my god - posted a while ago and Still No Comments!!!"

[Morlok]

THe pencil work you made is great, Im gonna take it out of the link:
http://home.arcor.de/corky13/Arcanfinal.jpg

[haha]

i agree with morlock, good pencils. What medium did you color it with? Also, i would reccomend some facial studies. Just sit around a place where a lot of people go by, and try to quickly sketch out their faces. this will help in a ton of ways (its helped me!). Scan some of these studies if you do em, and post them so we can see!

[corky13]

@Boris
Ok i dont ask for comments if i dont get them in the "good" way....

@morlock
thank you.

@haha
Also thank you.
Yes i need some practice in face anatomics. Your idea is nice...ill try that out i promise ;)

Edit= oh and i use a HB 0,5 Mechanical Pencil and a sheet of A4 sized paper for this...

[VinceIII]

lol dont feel bad at all as long as i have been doing my art i have yet to come close to mastering the digital effects with any photoshop but i like the pencil drawing better but that is my opinion as opposed to several others
nice work! :D

[sjoerd]

clean it up...

[c0g]

Good stuff... especially for 17.

[corky13]

thnx q all ;)

@VinceIII
Yeah...i also like pencil drawings etc. more than digital arts but i dont think i can get somedays a "artistical job" without knowledge of colors and digital Arts.....

@sjoerd
Yeah maybe i should do that ^^

@c0g
Thank you