Psychiatric room+gas station

[tharmine]

Here is a concept image for a psychiatric hospital.

http://www.tharmine.com/images/baignoir05.jpg

and here is a desert gas station


Tell me how to improve :Dhttp://www.tharmine.com/images/station005.jpg

[Joeslucher]

The mountains on the left in the gas station picture are distracting. I'd tone down the detail on that. The grass or dirt in that one looks like concrete. It's so neutral and you've added cracks and fissures in it so it reads like concrete to me. That first one rocks. My only crit on it is the texture on the wall to the far left isn't in perspective so it looks like it's obviously a texture layer. The way the cracks cross from the close side of the tub and go into the tub make it obvious again that it is a texture layer or textured painting rather than a textured tub. The textures are the strong points in these pieces. Keep it up.

[tharmine]

Thanks for the coments. In fact, the texture you are talking about is there only to do some "old picture look" at the image. So it is obiously a flat layer on the top of the image. If it's not good, i will certaibnly remove it. And ok for the montain, i will fix it. :)

[Spacemanchuck]

I like the texture, the only thing I dont really like is the bright smudging above the character in the hospital... I think it might be for movement but it looks like he's glowing to me... Um, super depressing work, I love it!!! I like the gas station alot as well... its the last gas station ehh? Very apocalyptic...
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[tharmine]

Thanks for the comments. Yeah, the glowing man.....Hmmm, the idea is that the story put this hospital between real worl and dream fiction. So i wanted to put this guy between real and illusion. I perhaps don't get enough deep in the idea, so it's why it's not clear...

[Ulysses]

Great work I like the textures in both of the pieces!

[tharmine]

So here is the bath room without the overlay last texture and the gas stationw ith less details in the background.
http://www.tharmine.com/images/baignoir.jpg
http://www.tharmine.com/images/station.jpg