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direwolf
November 24th, 2002, 09:16 PM
hello..first time to post my own work..quite differ from the first imagination, but not pretty bad..i think.
http://docillgun.wwww.to/gallery/data/duelb2small.jpg
welcome all your opinion about this one..
:evilbat:
RYL rulez!!
mime
November 24th, 2002, 09:36 PM
all i can say is WOW
great colors and composition
even if its nearly perfect to me, all i could day is that you should have avoided to have her left foot tangent to the right leg, the impression of depth in this areas is kinda lost because of that, if the left foot was just a little over the right leg the clarity would be better i think ...
but thats really awesome, what i said is really nothing :)
direwolf
November 24th, 2002, 09:43 PM
thanks for your reply...your critic hits the center of my weak point...my work always looks flat.
alot of hard work and study : the only saviour!!
Batteram
November 24th, 2002, 11:35 PM
This is pretty damn good. This picture kind of reminds me of Brom only difference is that yours looks smoother and more graceful.
Anywayz, very cool piece...
Tedsuo
November 25th, 2002, 03:09 AM
That is far and away the WORST case of athlete's foot I have ever seen.
:)
Really well done! Is there a story behind this one?
wus
November 25th, 2002, 03:21 AM
wow! Looks Good!
:thumb:
bOne
November 25th, 2002, 03:47 AM
the colors are very well rendered, but the anatomy s a bit strange... We feel like the top and the bottom of her body aren't the same size.
brads3d
November 27th, 2002, 11:37 AM
I think this is one of the best images I've seen in a while. I can't believe you don't have a website. If you do, please email the url to me.
mailto:Brad@Brads3D.com
dodowa
November 27th, 2002, 12:52 PM
Waaaa~excellence imagination!:D
it is really hot! great work!
..where your location? school? company?
my location is graduate school 'TED' in kookmin univ
:chug:
J.Peckham
November 27th, 2002, 01:34 PM
i would've liked the hips to be bigger...at least a little wider than the shoulders, still better than i can do :) good job!!
zeitgeist
November 27th, 2002, 03:59 PM
ohh v nice coloring
what a dangerously nice butt :D
teh position of her upper torso is kinda funkeh...
great work direwolf
robcamp
November 28th, 2002, 12:14 AM
very very cool! Nice buns!
Maybe the sky above her could use a bit more refinining.
The pose kinda reminds me of my goddess http://forums.sijun.com/viewtopic.php?t=30091 (goddess) image.
If you have been inspired by it, I am glad.
Fozzybar
November 28th, 2002, 04:11 AM
direwolf...hotfingers!
SamusNeo
November 28th, 2002, 07:39 AM
This has some nice smooth rendering and the clouds look really good. Her shiney butt captivates me as well...uh...for artistic reasons. On the flip side, her shoulder looks dislocated and the proportions could use a little refinement. I would also like to see more definite drawing solutions for the hands and feet. Otherwise a good clean pic, I really like the looser strokes in her hair and smoke. Keep em' coming.
davi
November 28th, 2002, 07:46 AM
the line licking the brest to the torso, seems a bit too sharp and bold. and i have a problem with the arm's elbow area, seems to loose shape around there. Great piece though, If you can work out the little issues, It will no doubt be a "masterpiece".
brokencow
November 29th, 2002, 11:07 AM
this is awesome!
good jorb!
tuffenuff
November 30th, 2002, 11:47 AM
Holy crap direwolf!!
How long does it take you to do these? This is awsome. truly amazing!! i like the color especially.
Keep it up!!
ps: U live in S.Korea? I'm from Seoul, but now in US. Happy 2 meet u bro!
- Jeff Kang -
WhiteBlaizer
November 30th, 2002, 02:21 PM
Nice pic!, but i think the same as Davi. I see a irregular form in her shoulders. Anyway, excellent work man. Power korean!! :D
Prometheus|ANJ
December 1st, 2002, 09:18 AM
Very nice! I like the highlights (esp. on the butt :p ).
Critwise:
It seems the skin goes warm (orange) a bit 'randomly', like on the buttcheek or the lower part of the boob. At other parts it's a bit too grey (black mixed with pink skintone)
The neck-shoulder part looks a bit odd. Perhaps the neck + head and the shoulder thats further away should be moved down left? And the closest shoulder moved up right a tad? I dunno. You can always grab the lasso tool and try.
Looking good anyways
nardfrog
December 1st, 2002, 03:53 PM
Very nice, You are quickley making it on to my "pay attention to this artist list." The shoulder does look off, but dont lose any sleep over it. You color is great.
Post more!
Atmospheria
December 2nd, 2002, 05:58 PM
oh yea!
can't say anything....it's fab!
ChadTHX1138
December 2nd, 2002, 07:25 PM
Very nice work i'm not so keen on your feet other than that i like it.
I just came back from seoul recently and had a really good time. I really dig the BBQ there, even tried Ox-tail MMmmmm.......
Grooveholmes
December 2nd, 2002, 07:28 PM
Oooh this one is beautiful. Great work. I love the warm sky.
Hudnut
December 4th, 2002, 08:25 PM
Wow. That's beautiful. Your color palette is excellent. I love it! Now you gotta post more.
Dave
Teknoholic
December 4th, 2002, 11:36 PM
Great work!
I think they're right about the shoulders.
Another thing that's bothering me is the leg on our left. This is kind of a draftsman-type complaint, but the knne doesn't look like it's any farther away than the butt or foot. You could try some rounding on the thigh and calf, and also decontrast the farthest area SLIGHTLY.
Also adding more contrast to the foot and butt so they come forward away from the knee.
nice painting :chug:
battlemonkey
December 6th, 2002, 11:54 PM
Man... i love this one~ she kind of reminds me of "jesse" from TEAM ROCKET (pokemon) no offense of course~
Darkness
December 7th, 2002, 03:56 AM
:eek: droooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooool
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