Finished Short Comic - Brief Mind

[Laelecetes]

This is a comic for an intro to sequential class I have. I finished over the course of a couple of days. When the deadline came I had to color the last 3 pages in one day! O_O; I hurt...

I am not very pleased with some of the colors. The only parts I like are panel 3 on page 1, page 2, and the bottom of page 3. Lemme know what you think! If you have any advice on color please help! I need it. If you can, please do a paint over. Enjoy.

Oh and excuse the ULTRA shitty, cover page. I HAD to make one so I plopped this one in 10 minutes.

http://studentpages.scad.edu/~cwalke24/Splash2web.jpg
http://studentpages.scad.edu/~cwalke24/p1web.jpg
http://studentpages.scad.edu/~cwalke24/p2web.jpg
http://studentpages.scad.edu/~cwalke24/p3web.jpg
http://studentpages.scad.edu/~cwalke24/p4web.jpg

[Boris]

Lucky bum.

[Bradart]

Kinda make me wanna be a bum. I love your character designs. Very nice angles and panels. You know what you're doing. A Very strong piece of work, this is. 48 out of 50.

[SoulFusion]

Love the story, That bit of filosophy gives it a nice extra.
The only thing that bugs me is the lettering.
Something less bold would work better, I think. And it would read better too.

[AnarchyAo2]

Oh god. Not another Roper!

[Laelecetes]

Hmm. I am suprised you guys enjoy it so much. I thought it was kinda' weak. Thanks!

About the philosophy I threw that in as a gimmick to spice it up. Gimmicks are good.

[Minion]

I'd really suggest changing the font to something other than Impact, it doesn't go to well with comics...