girl with briefcase wip *updated* mar 16

[angel of light]

Since i'm new i thought i'd do a wip post to see if people have any c&c. the line art was not by me. It was drawn by Martmaduke. I'm colouring it in Corel Photopaint 10. so critique away.

http://www.sfu.ca/~oalexis/nb127%5b1%5d.jpg

[Redmond]

Ahah nice! :D

[hoopa]

only crit on the colouring is that the shadows around her right hand are maybe too dark. The rest looks really good. Just one thing about the line work, her right hip is not right. Looks like its dislocated.

[Irate Customer]

I like the motion created in the piece. My only thought is that her right hip is pushed too far out. It draws the eye because the angle looks very unnatural. I would tone that part down a little bit.

With a little work this is going to be a fine piece.

Irate

[Redmond]

Don't forget to post it when it's done.

[angel of light]

i won't, it won't be done until next week, because i'm not at home right now. i'm in edmonton :)