BigDump, n00bie.

[hollachak]

hey, i'm new to the forums,
not art forums, jst this one, heh.... but it seems great here, so i wanted to post some stuff maybe get some comments or crits....
NONE of these could've took me more than 5-10 min, except the bob marley, and the sketches...
and my anatomy believe it or not is at the moment like 50 times as good as it used to be, i'm still reading this anatomy book...haha anyways... check out my stuff....

Got a thing for african chicks, she looks mulatto though..:D
http://hollachak.web1000.com/girl2.jpg

This is from my sketchbook and yes i did put a filter on it cuz i screwed it up pretty bad tryin to color it...
http://hollachak.web1000.com/GirlInColor.jpg

My FIRST digital work that i was decently happy with. [1st saved work ever, haha]
http://hollachak.web1000.com/guyno3.jpg

Did this in 9th grade a few yrs. back
http://hollachak.web1000.com/marley.jpg

This is from a page in my sketchbook, I added to the page after i scanned it, then made another page, but ripped them out cuz i got pissed at my lack of skill...:(
http://hollachak.web1000.com/sketchin.jpg

Prolly about 3 min OC sketch.
http://hollachak.web1000.com/cloudsmoon.jpg

Prolly about 5-7 min OC sketch.
http://hollachak.web1000.com/colorfulsky.jpg

Did this for the coloring book, might've got this in under 1 min.
http://hollachak.web1000.com/color_job.jpg


anyways, any input is appreciated,

but aight... i'ma get goin..
thanks.

peece
-jonJon
:chug:

[shortmikeshort]

What I like: Your sense of color. Esp. the nighttime moon pic. Could use a few highlights for contrast, but otherwise it's well done.

But I'm not sure if you're a cartoonist or a life artist. Because your portraits look like beginner life drawing projects. Everything is still very stylized, the eyes are a bit too big, and theres no real good sense of modeling.

Work on your life drawing skills and your cartoon style will be freakin' awesome. I see a lot of potential here.

[ProudestMonkey]

You've got a great color sense... my favorite pic is definatly the night time OC one... i love that...

But as shortmikeshort said... work on your anatomy and life drawing skills as you said you've been doing... and keep doing the digital paintings!

Keep it up!


Proudest

[lili goli]

love ur work..
as they say
you've got a great sense of color!!
love your work!! ;)
keep it up!!! :D

[hollachak]

heh thanks,

i was actually worried about my "color sense" more than my drawing. thanks,

but i know i need to further define my anatomy, cuz i see a style starting to form i guess, but i don't know where it's going.... so i'ma just keep practicing my anatomy and stuff...

thanks for the input peoples.:D :D

but i'm in class not supposed to get online... so peece

any more crits comments appreciated..

peece

-jonJon