alturus (comic pencils)

[alti]

http://members.optusnet.com.au/drummonds/pg1com.JPG
this is the raw pencil off the scanner, i left room for the scripted lettering to fit all around it too.
i keep getting the feel of the alien space jocky from alien, but that was not my intention.

[shortmikeshort]

It feels a little too raw. If I were your inker, I would have a hard time filling in all the blanks. I assume this is not totally finished?

Check the perspective on the monitor. The image seems to be free of all perspective laws.