Portrait Of A Hacker

[Groady]

There's still a few changes left to be made to this but I felt like putting this out there for some c&c. Thanks.

http://www.graphicscenes.com/portrait.jpg

[ArtoriusRex]

I LOVE the expression on his face! Critical comments below:


- the right hand is bent around too far

- the perspective on the keyboard keys is off.

- His hands appear abnormally large

- The letters on his shirt could use some shading to make them look more connected to the fabric.

Hope this helps!

[SEVANS]

Agree with the hand comment.

[johanson]

Nice form in his left hand fingers. They really sing. Other parts of the image are trying to flatten out. You might want to play around a little with your edge treatment. Not every edge needs to stand out sharply from what is behind it. Try letting a few of them sit back, and see if it helps the eye move around the form instead of just stopping on its edge. The pimple is a nice touch. I also like the shiny nose. If you pull some more shininess into the forehead, that might really give him a gross oily look. Hope this helps.

have fun,

-andrew

[hoopa]

pretty good. agree with the right hand being bent too far, but I like the exagerated hands.

Just one thing, don't think they drool quiet soo much. :D