oil paintings WIP

[daarken]

here are 3 oil paintings that i am currently working on. the quality kinda sucks, my dig cam is terrible.

i need to make her head bigger.
http://www.daarken.com/boards/back.jpg

this one i think her upper legs are too small, ill have to repaint them.
http://www.daarken.com/boards/interior.jpg

this one i am finishing next week in class. this was after about 2 hours.
http://www.daarken.com/boards/asha.jpg

let me know what i need to fix, or any suggestions, thanks!

[Tedsuo]

Great rendering! I can't believe you knocked that bottom one in in two hours. But then, I'm slow as molasses on a cold day when it comes to oil painting. All your paintings have good color harmony and composition. The top one is especially strong. I agree with the self-crits you mentioned, only thing I'd add would be in the top one, watch the anatomy in her mid-back. I dunno, looks like you have a muscle that spans diagonally across her spine, or something. Please post 'em again when you finish!

[Starknaaaked]

the bottom 2 are nice..just need a bit more work..the 2nd one: her knees are too far up.as you said...but the top one:squint your eyes and look at how big her legs are..her body seems too thin and long to belong to those monsters!..maybe the model just has a disproportioned body..dunno.....and her head needs to be bigger..yes..and also work on the face..:beer: ...stark