Inspired by UT2K4

[FlipMcgee]

http://img22.photobucket.com/albums/v67/Flipmcgee/flipmcgee05.jpg

[Scubasteve]

You have a good start. A few things though....

First off, the guys legs are too short and he looks like he is sitting rather then just bending his knees. The girl on the left also has short legs and looks bow legged. The girl in the background is the most accuratly shaped.

The guys gun looks like a cardboard box, you may want to add some details and think of what real guns look like to some extent. Something that looks practical increases the realism and helps to bring someone into your artwork.

The jeep has a good shape but lacks detail. Add some paneling, rails, etc. Also, I've never seen a stick shift mounted on the dashboard.

The last thing is the rendering. everything has the same basic texture. For example, tire tread has a different texture then the metal plating of a vehicle. Im not sure what happened with the girl on the left's pants. It looks kind of messy.

There are quite a few anatomy problems, but don't give up! You have a good grasp of how to show form using line work, you just need to work on your anatomy and rendering. Keep it up!!!!:)

[Boris]

IS it finally finished? I dont think so.

[FlipMcgee]

Thanks for the feedback and encouragement Scubasteve! :cry:

Re: Tire treads, I didn't realize how hard it was to do this. Definitely will consult a ref next time.

Boris: Thanks for checking this out man. This is as finished as time and energy permits me. I chose to sacrifice details for the composition and gesture of the figures.

But the "box" cannon......Yeesszzz, it's bad :crosseyed:

[CANUCK_DOUGY]

no matter what people say about it, i love it. Its just a sketch anyway and im sure you will master the final piece. Keep on Truck'n