lady-girl

[thek0n]

http://img18.photobucket.com/albums/v53/thek0n/ladyGirl.jpg

a sketchy sketch of a sexy lady. Umm this was one of those that I started to make without wanting to do anything in specific and for some reason it turned out as a finnished character. I will, sketchet out again for the final image....however I'll try coloring this one.

[SEVANS]

She seems very short. The legs could be abit out of proportion if shes meant to be taller.

Her right hand looks odd - can't explain why though.

[hoopa]

might be some issue with proportions. I agree with sevans, her right thumb seems to be bent back too far or something. Also her arms are very stiff, no sign of elbows.

Don't want to sound like I'm nit picking at ur stuff, thats just what stood out at me.

[thek0n]

hey, thanx for the feedback. However, this is just a roughf sketch witch will be re-made on a bigger paper and will have more detail to it.

It's good you guys mention the whole elbow thing... her sleeves are big but maybee I should put semes on the shirt... shoulder pads suggest that she should be tall??? Ok. Make her taller then... good feedback thanks.... don't worry about the thums, I don't pay attention to those on a roughf sketch.

Thanx again :D