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EraserX
March 2nd, 2004, 12:36 AM
I know it's simple, but I have deadlines to make. Commentifications and critiquealations are appreciatated.

http://www.pensnpixels.com/postedimages/hellgirl.jpg

Pichuerca
March 2nd, 2004, 02:17 AM
I like it!.Good line work and good style comic.

EraserX
March 2nd, 2004, 11:05 AM
Thanks!

the machine god
March 2nd, 2004, 01:12 PM
I love it. The lines are clean and teh textures are nice. I like how it's nice and simple. Doesn't get to compicated and confusing. I do think you should give her a trenchcoat like Hellboy though. See seems a bit... naked perhaps.
Great job.

Toonboy
March 2nd, 2004, 07:04 PM
I think it's great... awesome line work and very solid. I kinda wish I could see her fingers though. Was that part of the time constraint?
-Toons

usagi yojimbo
March 2nd, 2004, 07:55 PM
maybe instaead of a trench give her a little bomber jacket in kinda the same style? i dunno, good work though

sunsneeze
March 2nd, 2004, 08:32 PM
looks great. she reminds me of soem of the more cartoony "Harley Quinn" art. 2 minor crits. maybe add a little more detail into the stone hand, and the curve in her back seems a little harsh.