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HARNELBE
March 1st, 2004, 02:55 PM
My fisrt WIP here :D
When i saw all the workes posted here...
I said... why not me :)
I'm actually "CGing" a personnal illustration to illustrate a concept.

I first design directly whith the tablet a composition. (1024X1280)
http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_01_LABO_wip000.jpg
http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_01_LABO_wip001.jpg
http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_01_LABO_wip002.jpg
http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_01_LABO_wip003.jpg
http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_01_LABO_wip004.jpg
when the composition is done i increased the work in X2 size
(here the original is a 2048X2560)
http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_01_LABO_wip005.jpg
Last biggest here for details...(which i'm crazy fan of... sorry in advance..):
http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_01_LABO_BIG.jpg
It will be finished tomorrow evening (in France...)
CU everybody!!!

Pichuerca
March 2nd, 2004, 02:23 AM
Wow! a rare concept I think. The colors in general are good but I think that you would have to put more sense of bright in the rays, looks ropes conected to the face (itīs a joke but try to improve it).

bye

HARNELBE
March 2nd, 2004, 05:14 AM
->Pichuerca
Yesss i'll add those effects you re talking about, at the end.
You're right, thanks!

i'm finishing the cleaning and putting the details of the helmet.

http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_02_LABO_wip006.jpg

lavhoes
March 2nd, 2004, 11:45 AM
The ear looks very low on his head, like around the jaw area. Otherwise, everything else looks great. Love the concept.

HARNELBE
March 2nd, 2004, 12:23 PM
-> lavhoes
:D :D :D
Yess you're right about the ears...
i've modified it.
it'smake me laugh now i'm looking
the old post....lol

The CG is almost finished:
i have to balance the render of the
character with the render of the helmet
there is a too strange difference.
(because i have some problem in the skin rendering...

http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_02_LABO_wip008.jpg

lavhoes
March 2nd, 2004, 08:13 PM
Much better!

I think you started out with the face facing a different way, and gradually it shifted over with each update. I do it all the damn time. Looks fitting now, though I must admit I liked the head better when it was facing more towards the scientist dudes.

I'd say, to balance out the head with the machine, add some more contrast, especially in the eyelids, the cheekbones, under the nose, and right around the ear. Maybe thin out colors a little bit, or maybe add some orange.

Good luck, can't wait 'til we can see it finished =D

HARNELBE
March 3rd, 2004, 06:10 AM
The CG like it will be used in the document project...

Not finished yet...
http://perso.club-internet.fr/arnaud.lebot/harnelbe/Archives/2004/WIPs/LABO/2004_03_03_LABO_wip010.jpg