Missing

[Jens]

Assignment for school, every week we have to make a postcard with a theme.. this week the theme was "missing".

http://users.pandora.be/NO1/Jens/missing.jpg

[Jane Radstrom]

The linework here is nicely emotional and I like the compositions. It looks like it didn't take too long to do and has a very clean, fresh, graphic quality. At the same time. I am not sure if the look really goes with the theme. Especially the colors, the light blue and peachy orange make me think of the beach, honestly. I think you might experiment with some other color combinations and then maybe bring them all into class and get the feed back of your teacher and class mates. :)

[DavidCousens]

I love how clean this looks. I like the fact the details are kept to a minimum here, it fits well with the subject.

Good stuff! :cool:

[Jeff Jaws]

Hey, if this were a real postcard, I'd buy it immediately!
I don't think the colours are such a bad choice, but trying somethng different might give it more mood than it still has.
good work! Why not completely b/w, making it look like a linolcut/woodcut (are those the right words?), except the skin colour?

Jj.