A bit o' help!(gratuitous nudity)

[JerMohler]

Hey folks,

Here's a piece I'm working on for class. The basic theme is "animals on vacation". Hence, I'm doing a tiger at a strip club. This piece is still majorly in the works.

I'd appreciate any input! C&C away!

Background:
http://www.jeremymohler.com/sketchbook/strippersback.jpg

Background + Strippers:
http://www.jeremymohler.com/sketchbook/stripnudes.jpg

[Jane Radstrom]

The background looks very nice, I love all the detail! I think the composition change is good, too. The pole in the foreground is off - the stuff wrapping around it should follow a similar perspective to the round stage. You might consider modifying the crotch of the stripper bending over. I don't think it would stick out that much, and it pulls my eye right to it. Is it what you want to be the focus of the piece? But that could also change with coloring. Are you going to color? Now with the tables mostly covered up, I am curious to see where you will fit in the tiger. It could be amusing if you used a wolf instead - ahd might explain why you picked a strip club.. that's not here or there though. :)

[JerMohler]

Hey, thanks for the good crit.

There are going to be tables in the mid ground and so the tiger(a wolf is a great idea I hadn't thought of, though...hmm...)will be on the right side, smoking a thick cigar and drinking a bottle of beer. And yeah, there is going to be colour, so, alot of the stuff in the foreground will change somewhat.

The stripper bending over is a bit distracting, isn't she? Hmm. I'll have to add some panties to her I think.

Thanks!

[Pezz3D]

gladiator stripping. Sorry had to say it.

[CANUCK_DOUGY]

Yo love the detail you put into the background...seems like you spent as much time on the girls as you did on the background. Love the ladies. Next time call me so i can bring the mudd....peace

[JerMohler]

Ugh.

This piece got scrapped. Ran out of time. Instead, I did this:

Of Goldfish and Dry Desert Heat. (http://www.conceptart.org/forums/showthread.php?s=&threadid=19531)

Quite a shift, eh?

[nick reynolds]

You should definatly finish this one up. I'm digging it, and the strippers are great.

Nice stuff.