My second comic book portfolio

[supermichaelman]

This is the beginning of a short story I was working on for a writer. The cover was the only inked part of the pieces. Ive been drawing whenever I can to try and make my style more mainstream, let me know what you guys think of the pieces overall and what I can do to get professional level, or any other advice you may have. I can't get any professionals to look at it, so I hope you guys can help.

The story is about the Young Avengers dealing with the loss of one of thier teammates... All the while a crowd of angry onlookers is harassing them. The story then flashes back to the " The siege" and back to funeral. these are the first 5 pages of the story.

http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg223/supermichaelman/second%20comic%20pages/YA0cover2.jpg

http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg223/supermichaelman/second%20comic%20pages/YA12.jpg

http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg223/supermichaelman/second%20comic%20pages/YA22.jpg

http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg223/supermichaelman/second%20comic%20pages/YA32.jpg

http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg223/supermichaelman/second%20comic%20pages/YA42.jpg

http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg223/supermichaelman/second%20comic%20pages/YA52.jpg

http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg223/supermichaelman/second%20comic%20pages/YA62.jpg

http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg223/supermichaelman/second%20comic%20pages/YA72.jpg

http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg223/supermichaelman/second%20comic%20pages/YA82.jpg

http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg223/supermichaelman/second%20comic%20pages/YA92.jpg

http://i249.photobucket.com/albums/gg223/supermichaelman/second%20comic%20pages/YA102.jpg