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July 17th, 2010, 06:38 PM
Wouldn't mind having some crit :) These are the most recent
July 18th, 2010, 10:29 AM
What is this about? Who is it for? What do you want to communicate?
July 18th, 2010, 10:32 AM
These don't make sense. The first one has several unrelated elements on seperate parts of the page, with no clear message.
July 18th, 2010, 02:20 PM
The first one was for a challenge to communicate your interests through design. In my case it was mathematics, coke, sci fi and pretty flourishes
The second one I imagined as a graphic for a game, called vice
July 18th, 2010, 05:23 PM
I don't have any complaints about the first one. I like the second one more. I just think you should sketch the character, instead of using a filter that's supposed to look like you did. Trace if need be. The imagery is great, but it stinks of filter.
July 18th, 2010, 05:41 PM
Yeah, I shouldn't have been lazy and used a filter, thanks for the feedback
July 19th, 2010, 12:23 AM
I'm definitely not calling you lazy. I'm just encouraging you to use your illustration skills. You are using a feature intended for people without the privilege of drawing ability. You have the talent, so put it to good use.
July 21st, 2010, 09:12 AM
I like the second one more.
I don't think mathematics, coke, sci fi and pretty flourishes
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