hell chick ver2 COLORED kinda

[ion one]

this is the second attempt after my crap failed one done in a rush, this was done in alot less of a rush....please C&C if you feel like it...i stil lhave alot of changes to make on thishttp://www.imgmag.com/images/kinghippo/hellgirlv2web.jpg

[SeraphSword]

Well first off, I really like the face (campbell influence?). I take it the horns and the hand are part of the hellboy thing, though you went a different direction with the hand I see.

Below the chest, the drawing starts to bother me. My own anatomy skills aren't that great so I can't give a in depth critique, but I'll mention what strikes me. the torso going down to the waist, her left side, seems a bit too thick and maybe not fully accounting for her ribcage. Her legs bother me a bit too. They just seem to be laying in an abnormal manner, but someone else might be able to pinpoint what exactly is off, they just look a bit wonky to me.

Overall I like the drawing, and you definitely have more skillz than me, hope to see this again when you've completed it. :)

[eugi+]

Love the face, but the rest of the bodys gotta go. I like the broken horn with the cross on it, thats really original, and the goggles are awesome too. The face looks very american-comic-like, not bad.
I think its good, but yeah, if you look at the legs they looked as if shes being pulled or something, this isnt so bad, but might want to look at that for a second.
I think everything else is fine, good job.

[ion one]

here is the inked version, colors soon to be posted...http://www.imgmag.com/images/kinghippo/hellgirlver2inkweb.jpg

[xHUNTERx]

There are some serious anatomy mistakes with the torso. If you turn your head 90 degrees to the left and look at it you'll know what i mean.

[eugi+]

I think the torso would be the ribcage area just before the hip bones right? if so, that should not be a bump, it shouldnt be going up and down, it should be resting, that area (just before the hips) should be a curve, going down a it, then going back up to catch up with the hip area.
It would only be a bump if she was forcing the oposite side of the torso area upwards, which results in a very bad and comfortable possition.
What should be a bump is the other side of the torso, the oposite side of the body, which is the one thats being made pressure upon.

[ion one]

thanks for the C&C people, this is the colored version and i went wiht magentaish cause hellboy was red, and now hellgirl is pink, i dont know how to color though and this is the super rough, ill stick with what is easy for me, the cell shade, i dont know how the fack some of you people color so good, oh well hope you like it so far and PLEASE tell me anything that you like or dont like.....and the horn is cut off magically floating there due to the magical string on the ends and she is not laying down she is leaning against a wall type thing, like inside edge of a swimming pool.....hope that cleared up what goes on in my head when i draw...http://www.imgmag.com/images/kinghippo/hellgirlver2inkcolorweb1.jpg