tank

[HYBRID187]

another mage warfare card i had davis words in the back of my head whilst doing this one and tried to stick to forms rather than detailing the hell out of it

http://www.renderosity.com/photos/ArtistArticle7198.jpg

[ceedubya]

Forms? What forms? Plus, how does it turn with 3 treads???


:?

[Giacomo]

Looks good.

Ignore the heckler- it's a good drawing, your sense of form is very clear.

For the next one, add CURVES...this one is very rectilinear. It feels very "real world" and not very fantasy. You might do well to sketch existing hardware (real or sci-fi) that you like to get a sense of how forms can project more drama- one suggestion might be to use forms that contrast in size and shape. (This tank is composed of three masses that are basically the same scale, which doesn't give much drama to the shape.)

The "three treads" problem might need to be addressed. It also looks like some of the guns can only turn through a limited arc, which is not a good thing for tanks.

Keep going,

G

[ceedubya]

Ignore the anonymous non imaginative posters. Listen to reason.

Or maybe this is better: AWWW DANNNNGGGGG!!!! THAT'S AWESOME B!!!!!!! DO MORE DO MORE!!!!

cw

[Giacomo]

Dear Chris Welch-

It's really great that experienced designers like yourself can take the time to go on these boards and tell newbies how much you think their work sucks.

It really makes you look *mature* and *openhearted.* I'm sure your reputation as a designer will skyrocket. Since you're still showing work from 1994 on your website, I'm guessing you could use all the help you can get.

G

[AnarchyAo2]

ceedubya, your sarcastic post is better then your first one. Which shows how stupid you are.

[ceedubya]

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[Miau]

well then stop posting stuff like this ...

hybrid, nice clear work, i agree with giacomo about the curves.

[kimchee]

Originally posted by ceedubya
OOOH...I'm hurting. This is going nowhere fast, so here's my response:

You are obviously a much nicer, more well liked, happy, sincere, talented, skilled at art, individual than I am. I am humbled by your presence, and please forgive my dissonant tone. I'm Soooooooo Sorry Mr. G. Your kung fu is MUCH better than mine. I cant even draw a circle I suck so bad.

cw

No, you seem to be able to draw circles fine, but that's about it. Your whole page design is based on spheres. Wow, how incredibly creative you are. Not to mention the fact that half your links lead to 404 page errors.

Your arrogance is unwarranted. Your work is infantile -- it matches your personality perfectly.

Oh, and say hi to all 12 members of your incredibly booming "forum" for me! You're obviously popular beyond belief.

[HYBRID187]

Originally posted by Giacomo
Looks good.

Ignore the heckler- it's a good drawing, your sense of form is very clear.

For the next one, add CURVES...this one is very rectilinear. It feels very "real world" and not very fantasy. You might do well to sketch existing hardware (real or sci-fi) that you like to get a sense of how forms can project more drama- one suggestion might be to use forms that contrast in size and shape. (This tank is composed of three masses that are basically the same scale, which doesn't give much drama to the shape.)

The "three treads" problem might need to be addressed. It also looks like some of the guns can only turn through a limited arc, which is not a good thing for tanks.

Keep going,

G

wow thanx for the indepth crit man i will apply this thinking to the next peice