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July 6th, 2010, 09:43 PM
Hi there. I've been playing alot of All Points Bulletin by Real Time Worlds and EA ever since I pre ordered it. Can't get enough. Any hoo, I thought it'd be fun to draw fan art.. so here goes. Please give me your feedback and thank you for your time.
July 7th, 2010, 02:18 AM
Hey dude, how are we suppose to give feedback on one piece. Im sure you have a portfolio or something, but basing an opinion off of one piece is very difficult. when asking for feedback, try to think as the viewer and ask yourself what would i want to see if i was viewing this for the first time.
I guess this looks good, haven't played APB, but I have seen the concept art from the game, and if that is the style your going for, you have a ways to go. Other than that, its a good composition, but I really cant give you legimate feedback off of 1 piece.
July 7th, 2010, 05:46 AM
that's definitely some good advice for the future, thank you.
anything you can recommend I should work on?
July 7th, 2010, 06:08 PM
If you put as much work into creating art than putting down other people's, you might not need to be looking for concept artists.
Kiung- Id say to pop out the colors a bit more, it all seems very grayscale to me. Looking at the APB art, there stuff is very vibrant, looks like graffiti almost. Something to keep in mind, try using custom brushes once you have made it to a point where your comfortable. I think in order to get that real gritty, graffiti look, adding some paint splatters or grunge, would take all your work further.
I hope this doesnt get assaulted-
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