sketches i drew (3-3-04)

[torey]

these are pictures i drew.
i'm trying to get better.
any critiques are welcome.
thank you.

http://bbnk.dhs.org/~mmarshall/Brandon-Bloodalmond.jpg
an orc....

http://bbnk.dhs.org/~mmarshall/Torsis.jpg
a troll...

http://bbnk.dhs.org/~mmarshall/Seeker.jpg
a girl...

http://bbnk.dhs.org/~mmarshall/ElectroBlast.jpg
another girl...

torey

[AnarchyAo2]

HA! You call those sketches?!














I'm so jealous...

[SeraphSword]

I like the whole batch :thumbsup: . The first troll in particular seems like one bad customer. And I like the little guy hanging of the girl's mace. Nothing I can really crit since these are obviously professional-level sketches. If you absolutely have to have something, I'd say that the first troll should have a much larger weapon, to emphasize his power. Either that or a very small weapon like a dagger to give it a farcical effect. Please post more :D .

[Chaser226]

HA! Sketches my arse! :bootyshak
Lets look at some of your color "sketches" now. :D














p.s great stuff.

[sodomizer]

yes... I don't believe these are sketches... lol, if they are... why haven't you dumped your FINISHES??

lol.. good stuff man

[torey]

thank you for your kind words.
http://bbnk.dhs.org/~mmarshall/Alien_Lord.jpg

http://bbnk.dhs.org/~mmarshall/Anchor.jpg

...here is more.

[Sularia]

Freaking awesome!

Sularia

[torey]

girls...

http://bbnk.dhs.org/~mmarshall/Badgirl.jpg
bad guy
http://bbnk.dhs.org/~mmarshall/Hero.jpg
good guy
http://bbnk.dhs.org/~mmarshall/clerk.jpg
girl at 7-11

ok.

thank you for looking.

[arghmisfit]

very nice! i love ur detail... but that last chick u posted, her feet kinda look funny

[darkautumn]

omg! This stuff is awesome... I don't know what you mean by sketches... but anyhoo... I would like to see what your finished pieces look like.

[andres_pad]

this stuff isd absolutely awesome. i reall like your style
it is confident, bold yet still exploring somehow. very nice indeed!


one critiscism though, imagine how much better it could be if you coloured (or greyscaled it). it is alittle confusing to just have the lines

[hoopa]

DUDE!, these are freakin' awesome!
Damn, wish I could 'sketch' like that.

[Luci]

Maybe its just me, but the sword in the first toll picture looks a little off... The perseptive kinda, and the way hes holding it doesn't look very natural.

[JSChang]

whoa, wheres this 7-11?

[slaine978]

The only thing that I thought I could critique is the tooth that's further away.(on the left of the drawing) on the first Orc. It looks likes it's to far from the face. Just a thought though. Your stuff is amazing. Keep up the good work.

[eugi+]

Originally posted by torey
girls...

http://bbnk.dhs.org/~mmarshall/Badgirl.jpg
bad guy



thank you for looking.

I swear shes hot heh, I like that drawing, very cool, very complete. Sketches? hah, no, if you added color, those drawings would be grand. Even without, those drawings are wicked.

[torey]

hello...

grandpa
http://bbnk.dhs.org/~mmarshall/Univision-S.jpg

uncle josh...
http://bbnk.dhs.org/~mmarshall/McDonalds2.jpg

more to come...

[bafl1]

those are great line wheight everything perfect you have some problems with breatsts and feet ...but wow .... that last drawing reminds me of my mom

[Hunger_Artist]

ooh, I like asian girls!

these sketches all seem to represent finished thoughts with nothing left unrendered...

I think it is ok to leave things out tentatively though too! if there is an idea you have but you are unsure how to finish it, its ok to leave parts of the sketch in abstraction.

[kidcrucial]

Need..............Color............first post pictures....

[torey]

http://bbnk.dhs.org/~mmarshall/McDonaldsATTACK!!!.jpg
playing around....

[hoopa]

eeeeewwwwwwwww

[Riley]

~shudder~ Nice lineart though!

[frilli]

Very nice! You should definately post some coloured.

[daniele]

just one crit, it seems that you are avoiding to draw hands, u often hide hands or draw fists, study hands and practice on tem and bring'em at the same excellent level of your work.

Bye :chug:

[Clank]

Those are amazing. No critiques from me.

[Oni-giri]

DUDE!!!!!
your are the master!
you should deffiniteley get a job at blizzard entertainment!
they will hire you when they see your drawings and there are very similar to the ones drawn by the guys who work there....

[Ninja_ASSN]

Nice stuff... great lines u have, ql technique, but anatomy isnt so good. U should work some more on that, so ur stuff will look even better.

[shadoman]

Damn!! These are really nice, er, um sketches... you cannot call these sketches. I think that your inking skills are very refined. I agree on working on the anatomy and hands, it will make you a much stronger artist.