Newbie needs help

[Milady]

First I'm sorry for my english... :) It's not good, I know.

I have make this sketch a long time ago and now I've coloured it in ps.
I don't know if the shadows are correct. What can I do?
It look strange for me...

http://img26.photobucket.com/albums/v77/Milady/Lord_darker.jpg

[nikia]

I would deepen your shadows. Add more highlight under the creature's chin and jaw, on the chest, right shoulder and front of the neck. Also define the chest muscles more, run the line of the jaw up past the neck a bit more, and the same where the creature's left hind leg meets the stomach. It looks good, I think it just needs more definition. I like the way you've done the light. I would also "bend" the toes. That's a lot of weight to have the creature standing on tiptoe. I would also add some ground under it's feet. Good luck with it and I hope this helps.

[Milady]

Thank you very much
for you very good tips!
I begin again to shade my creature.
If its ready, I'll upload it.
:)

[Milady]

So, this is the result of your tips.
You've got right with the shadows,
it looks now better!

http://img26.photobucket.com/albums/v77/Milady/Lord_darker2.jpg