Scifi babe 'Sleep' >>nudity<<

[CENOBITE]

Here is an image i had in my head for awhile after watching 'Alien'. How long space flights might have many boring moments and how there isn't a 'day' or 'night' when you just fall asleep where ever you might be, whenever.



Just a note, those are moon tatoos around her navel and nipples.




http://images2.deviantart.com/i/2004/05/1/f/Sleeper.jpg

[DaemonMagus]

The hair looks a little strangely positioned on the head, besides that, I'm just wondering if you are going to paint it/shade it/whatever? Line art, especially more detailed ones like this, get a little confusing compared to paintings which have value/color/and shape to distinguish between the forms.

[Zwalharulzuki]

Pretty good, but the blurring doesn't look right. Especially in the lower part of the drawing. It looks haphazardly slapped on near the end. Fix that part up and it'll look a lot better. Also try to get the "white' of the drawing actually white. The difference will make the entire thing a lot more clear, and easier for the eye to read.

[Hale]

I think it looks good for the most part. I would suggestr folowing the others advice and work on the hair and consider removing the blur, it's just detracts from your clean style. I also think that what the other guy said is true, either u need to color this to create focuse points (even flat color will do) becausw right now the eye roams around. Anotehr idea is to use line weight to accomplish this. (ie- bolder outline around oarts of her to make her stand out from the b/g etc.) Line weight will allow you to keep this b&w and strengthen the entire look. I really like your style alot and your details are great, all you need is a litle oomph to make it pop.

[CENOBITE]

Thanks for the crits, guys. Yes, the blur was slapped on at the last minute to help with the focus. I will consider painting this in the future, maybe just to help clean up some of the lines which i dont like from when I originally drew this in ink. Thanks!