Consumption (Final)

[Ankh]

This is a pseudo-final, pending a few tweaks here and there. ...more than likely I'll add some more detail to the background, just to add a horizon and whatnot, but this is the final layout and whatnot. C&C welcome.

http://www.sbnage.com/transfer/fatman-wip.jpg

Full res: http://www.sbnage.com/transfer/fatman.jpg

[davi]

looking good, i already told you that the brain looks similar to skinned potatoes.

also something that concerns me is how hard it was for me to catch on to what the eyesocket was.

because of the dark hair and the fluxuation of contrasting values in the area, the eyesocket completely confusing at first glance.

[Blue Severin]

Yeah, the eye is a bit strange. I think it's this light shape in the top of the socket. I'ts too light for being in shadow, and ruins the illusion of the hole.

http://img19.photobucket.com/albums/v56/blue_severin/eye.jpg

The rest of the drawing is awesome. I love the idea and the style you drew it in. Sweet.

[Teeth]

Lookin good!

[Ankh]

This is now the final, updated version. Please critique and give suggestions for next time.