Poke The Newbie

[Avatar2020]

Hello everyone, what up!

:D

This is my first posting on this site and i have to say EVERYONE HERE ROCKS. Its great that so many artist have found a rockin place to show and critque so many styles and methods.

These next 3 drawings(WIP) are perspective assignments for a class and i am looking for any Crits as to were i should go and what is wrong with them.
THANX &
PEACE OUT
:chug:
http://us.f2.yahoofs.com/bc/4036d5d7_14e5e/bc/My+Documents/TEMPLE.jpg?bfki_OABiFTRBJ.j
http://us.f2.yahoofs.com/bc/4036d5d7_14e5e/bc/My+Documents/MEDTOWN.jpg?bfki_OABVYLZeYHa
http://us.f2.yahoofs.com/bc/4036d5d7_14e5e/bc/My+Documents/CRYPT.jpg?bfki_OABzDVH4b5D

[SeraphSword]

I can't see the pics.:(

[Avatar2020]

Ya, so my pics won't load. hhmmmm. i am using yahoo briefcase to hold these pics and it seems the links are screwed. U guys know of any good sites for storage and why my links might be messed?

[AnarchyAo2]

www.photobucket.com

[SeraphSword]

No idea why they are screwed up, but you could put them on Geocities for free (although that has it's own hassles for posting). Best sites (free) that I know of are photobucket.com, and deviantart.com (though a bit slow).

[Avatar2020]

Thx Guyz! I'll repost the pics asap!

[Avatar2020]

and for the second time around......
http://img30.photobucket.com/albums/v91/Avatar2020/TEMPLE.jpg
http://img30.photobucket.com/albums/v91/Avatar2020/MEDTOWN.jpg
http://img30.photobucket.com/albums/v91/Avatar2020/CRYPT.jpg

[Avatar2020]

the last one was edited in photoshop so it looks kinda weird but anyways.:chug:

[Chris Beatrice]

There is a perspective problem, I think, in the first image (the one of the pyramid). Trace the steps on the left side back to the vanishing point, and do the same with those on the right. I think you'll find that the two points aren't on a horizontal line (or that the ones on the right don't meet at all). It's fine to have a "crooked" horizon line, but judging by the near perfect verticals in this piece, I don't think that's what you're after.

Put another way, the bottom stair on the right should be going down as it goes back in space, not up as it is here.

Hope that helps

[LEN]

Avatar2020

What's your back ground, what class is this for. I like what I see. The secound pic could use more contrast and texture thogh. I'll look out for more of these.

[mtomczek]

Nice drawings, and welcome to the community. I do ask that you please resize these images, as they are really big, and even with my monitor set at 1600x1200 I still have to scroll around the window to see them. Thanks a bunch.