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[Spidey-man]

Hello everyone this is my very first post. I have viewed and enjoyed the site for some time and finally got up the nerve to join and show. I have one ? before i get to the pictures, can i post people who are copyrighted. I draw many comic book related pictures and just wanted to know if i can post them.

Now for the pictures. These are sequencials (cant spell). I did these fairly quick one day. Enjoy C&C are appreciated.
http://img21.photobucket.com/albums/v62/spidey-man/comics/page1rg.jpg

http://img21.photobucket.com/albums/v62/spidey-man/comics/robopinupfin.jpg

[Calle_]

Hi and welcome =) enjoy CA.

I think you need alot more detail and values on this.
good work, keep posting =)

[Giacomo]

Looks good!

I can't figure out what the story is, though. Maybe you should post the story...then it'd be easier to offer feedback on the art.

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[Octopuspuke]

The legs are really bad and so is the rest of the picture.:D :D

[Hale]

Well it's mice to see some sequential stuff here at Conceptart. I think you would do well to take some life drawing classes and really work on anatomy. I also think that you should get some books on comics or do some Joe Kubert school correspondence courses to learn about panelsa and pacing in comics, which are very important, because your panel layout for that first page israndom and doesn't add to the story, you need to think of panels size and shape as indications of what is goingo n within them and how long it is taking , exapmle a long panles for a slow "camera" movement, or a slanted panel to show action (diagonals infer action). Hope this helps, keep drawing!

[Spidey-man]

thanks alot everyone. I am not used to actual critics cause everyone around me just loves me. This is great and im always working on anything i can. Im still in highschool in a little town so i dont have much to workwith for a little while longer. So once again thank you.