CRITIZE ME! please

[Pichuerca]

I have done some skecth. In all of them i think that I have the same serius problem, I draw them too much raised.

Can you tell me other miles of errors that you found on them.
proportions, muscules , etc..


http://personales.ya.com/sanand/Heads.jpg
http://personales.ya.com/sanand/personaje2.jpg
http://personales.ya.com/sanand/piva.jpg

Bye...

[Joeslucher]

You have perspective lines for the naked chick but it doesn't look like they're followed. The bottom of her right boob (our left)
is lower or even with the other boob making her right nipple seem extremely high.

On your drawing of the guy, watch out for concave lines they make the figure less solid. The adductors is where I'm seeing this.
Below his pectorals on his ribcage you've drawn some serratus anterior muscles which are favorites of many artists but you need
to take another look at the real thing and I think you'll find more order to it. The outside of the ankle goes down lower than the inside
which you have wrong in the male drawing but correct in the female drawing.

Hope I helped.

[Pichuerca]

Thanks a lot. You have made me seen alot of errors that i didnt think of them!!!.

I try to correct them. Thanks again.