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WillSchnevel
February 23rd, 2004, 12:16 PM
Hey there, first post. Been around a while, never made a thread, yadda yadda yadda, the usual. :p Anyways, here's my ninja.
Hope it's not to big. :x
http://www.lansrc.com/willschnevel/images/kickingninja2_sm_color.jpg
C&C?
SEVANS
February 23rd, 2004, 01:21 PM
Nice movement and colour.
Not to sure about the use of speed lines for the front foot.
The bicep doesn't seem attached correctly to his arm pit area. You may need to lose or alter a line or two there.
Plus the green glow from his hand looks almost like an ink spill at the moment, perhaps the lack of any linework is separating this area from the rest of the image.
I do like the image though, just giving constructive criticism.
Devils Jester
February 23rd, 2004, 01:34 PM
nice use of perspective on the foot but it looks as if you lost the perspective in his right arm and his torsoe but good pic all the same
azjohnl
February 23rd, 2004, 02:30 PM
nice! good drawing and cool action pose!
i am digging it!
I would maybe like to see it without the blurred foot, i dunno, it sorta works but i am not yet sold on it :)
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