zombie design

[McCambridge]

http://jmccambridge.free.fr/images/jade/char/full/11.jpg


Hello.This is my first post. I work in Paris France, mainly for video games. I just finished a board game and I'd love to share my work with you to get some feed back on my desgins . The work on this site is very impressive. Thanks for lookin at my stuff

[Aleksi]

Hey ! Good Job John !!! :D

Glad to see you here, mate ! ;)
I hope you'll post more of your recent works soon!

[Myriadian]

I like it. The colours are good, the pose is great, and proportions accurate. However, to me, it doesn't look that zombie-ish. Though you've got the facial expressions, and you've got the drool and pose down, I find he doesn't look rotten. Perhaps it's his clothes, which look too nice and tidy, despite the vomit and collective substances on the front. Everything is tucked in neatly. You may want to take a chunk out of his side, or something. He doesn't look dead, he looks mentally challenged.

If you mess him up a bit, give him a mortal wound, then I think you've hit it head on.

Edit: Checking up on my post, I hope I'm not being too harsh. I really like your work, a lot, but it's just some C&C. You've done great work with this, and I'd love to see more from you.

[McCambridge]

Hi Myriadian,
Your comments are very welcome. I agree with you. I made this a few years ago and i was really held back to go full out on a raving mad zombie. I had on blood no guts good taste brief to follow so I couldn't go all out.
You're not too harsh I feel what you said is a fair judgement. Thankyou

[Myriadian]

Well you hit it perfectly, then. I really enjoyed this zombie, and the other one, too. Keep up the great work, and I hope to see many more of your drawings!