work in process

[deprive]

Thought it was finished, but I think it can use a bit more work. Could use some advice on the eyes. Also can you guess who it is?

http://winemaiden.com/cc.jpg

[Pichuerca]

Cover the eye and the nose with a hand and you will see that your face is prettier than after without both parts. Try to redit the nose and, in addition, i think that the left eye has been partially taper for the nose.

Moreover, see the head toturials to complete your study, i think that is useful.

Bye

[deprive]

Updated
http://www.winemaiden.com/cc2.jpg

Your right, it does look way prettier. Redit the nose how? I think it looks fine the way it is.

[nikia]

Make the irises and pupils larger. They are too small for the size of the face. Also the neck is way too long. Nice coloring job though.

[deprive]

http://www.winemaiden.com/cc3.jpg

Thanks nikia, I think its really starting to look like her now.

[alkaline111]

the eyes are very white.... as many people asume they arre.. but they are influenced by the color of the skin and atmosphere around them (so they rarely are white).....but thats if your just going for a more realism.. than stylized portrait.. worth given it a try... and think where your lightsource is..... would the eyelids be casting shadows?.....may give the eyes more form... but looks good!! ....keep it up fella

[deprive]

http://www.winemaiden.com/cc4.jpg
alkaline111 took your advice, and fleshed out the eyes alittle. Did some minor corrections, anyone else got a suggestion?

[Ninja_man]

I thought that something in the eye area looked wierd and now I know what it is.... The Eyebrows! I think the eyebrows are a little too high up (and since it looks like some kinda movie star then you should probably make the brows looked "penciled" in), you might want to try making the brows lower and see how it looks.

Other than that, lookin good:D

[deprive]

Thansk for all the comments, but I don't think I'll keep working on this.