Scribble -> Monster

[Leotaku]

Hey,
Here's a couple of monster designs I did for a friend. I always work from scribbles to produce them, as I could NEVER come up with these from scratch...If you have any advice, I'd appreciate it.
http://avalanchestudios.net/leotaku/mon18scribble.jpg

http://avalanchestudios.net/leotaku/mon18.jpg

http://avalanchestudios.net/leotaku/mon19scribble.jpg

http://avalanchestudios.net/leotaku/mon19.jpg

[Pichuerca]

Your pics are really good, they have a lot of details, this is good. But I think, that you have a problem with the proportions in the characters. you dont have to try to adjust it in the limits of the paper. I think that you do a first sketch to solve this problem. With this sketch try to apply the basics of a draw to give him more credibility (skeleton, muscules.., i know that the characters are monsters, and you can do it with the all you want ).

The second picture is the best, is more terrify, i think. (maybe is less human that the firt and you didn´t have to think in the proportions). Your ink style is very good too...

[Leotaku]

OK, thanks for the suggestion.
By the way, I don't ink these, these were done with pencil. But once i scan them, i adjust the levels to make it darker.
Thanks for replying.

[Pichuerca]

Oh? I see. Good job then with the pencil process. I like it very much, try to ink it .;)