Spooooky

[ZeFFe DucKiSlatE]

http://members.fortunecity.com/zeffe/GoNatti.jpg


http://members.fortunecity.com/zeffe/UFOcoffee.jpg
:p

[bat]

This is a cute concept, but not entirely finished in my opinion. Myself, I would do two things to make this image 'pop'.

1) Add shading to the 'saucer' and cup. There is a light source behind the object, and with such little shading, it looks a bit 2 dimensional on a very nice background. The edges of the cup and saucer could use a bit of cleaning up as well, too.

2) I would change the lettering, the font to something a bit more 'airy' perhaps and I would also add a layer of lettering and offset it, just slightly, using the grey colour for the background and a lighter, offwhite for the forward letters.

Hope that helps,
b a t

[JeniThus]

heehee.
The idea is sweet. Just integrate the cup into the lighting of the background some.