Portfoio work.

[stewart one]

Hey everyone. Heres 2 pieces i did just rescently. Gotta get a new job soon. The first is going to be colored and the second is a concept for a 3d scene that im going to do to present my 3d characters. C&C welcome.


http://www.robotarm.se/skiss/skiss42.jpg http://www.robotarm.se/skiss/skiss43.jpg

[alkaline111]

second ones good stuff.. likes it.. first one... proportions are alittle off. im asuming teh traps/shoulders are that way purposly....i think your losing focus of where your horizon line may be always draw one even if it is for a figure just to keep track of how htings would be viewed....it looks like you may have lost that....top of the body gives me the impression that yo are looking down on this character while the bottom half looks eye level.......always be thinking of form brother..... im for sure no pro but i hope this helps...but i think the 2nd one works great... keep it up boss.....

by the way love your bio.. hehe thats great

-hunter

[stewart one]

thanks man. Thats some good tips there. The proportions are off a little on purpose. but maybe it doesnt work... dunno. What do you other people out there think?

[Theo]

Another swede!

I like both pics, got potential, his odd proportions kinda appeal to me, I like that kinda stuff, kinda like the bent dudes davi draws sometimes. The second pic is cool, and probably renders awesome with nice light, but I'd try and find some more interesting shapes in there, now its a tad basic.

just my thoughts tho, Im wrong sometimes.. Good luck man, My portfolio is faaar away.

Btw, do you have any clue on how the hell one would göra för att söka conceptart jobb i sverige? de lär inte finnas många av dom.

-Theo

:chug:

[FlipMcgee]

Your pieces look definitely promising.

What's visually confusing in the first sketch is the perspective of the figure's left deltoid and bicep muscles. The forearm (how you foreshortened it) and the gripping hand looks okay. But the upperarm looks off.

To improve it perhaps, is lengthening the foreshortened bicep a little bit so the elbow points, both left and right, align closer to each other. Or, consider another way of "cutting" (defining) that left deltoid.

Hope this helps. Good luck.

[stewart one]

ill try it out. thanks yall.