wierd shrimp

[firematador]

alright alright......this is just a sketch i did in class,,,and liked it,,,think i might use it in my portfolio,,,,but i want it to look more aggressive and dont know what else to do w/ it.....can anyone help me out?http://home.comcast.net/~o_alonso/wsb/media/317364/shrimp.jpg

[J.Mac]

OK i amm going to give some crits;

- "imo" nice concept looks boring though. the line width is the same all over you should try vary and use thick and thins.

_ "imo" maybe you could do some research and try to develop some more anatomy. try to make it look like it would be able to function. i am not saying that it oculdn't right now, but maybe more thought about it would be better.

it is a good idea! i would like to see you push it further :D

-Jesse

[firematador]

alrighty then....thanks for the feedback...ill try to make another version.....of it soon...

[Pichuerca]

I think that the concept is good, no reason for use proportions. But, I think that you have to think more in the interior structure of your criature. You have to question yourself about all of the parts of all of your drawings. Where come from this legs..(How??, start with skin,?) ? or Has skulls...??. I dont know if i explain it correctly (ohh... my little english). but try to find out your errors. (thanks to Signature to this. ;))