WAR BEAST concept

[danbucknam]

Here is my concept drawing for my war beast/mode of transportation.
http://www.layerten.com/art/beastdrawing.jpg

[danbucknam]

I am in the modeling process. any feedback or critiques would really help me out thanks:chug: :evilbat: http://www.layerten.com/art/beast.jpg

[danbucknam]

http://www.layerten.com/art/beastcarpaint.jpg

[exactpixel]

looking good, it's been a while.

the toe nail claw things are a little off from your drawing, maybe make them bigger ( thicker), that might make it a little more realistic.

Other than that: looks killa

[amphex]

Wow, thats looking amazing!
Cant wait to see it finished =D

[ne obchod]

ah beautiful. can't wait to see the finished product.

have anymore?

[danbucknam]

hey thanks guys! I was wondering if anyone had any suggestions on the anatomy and if I should put the horns on the top of the head or not will try to have an update soon.:chug:

[danbucknam]

sorry, my server was down for a few days, I am working on redoing the feet and legs, will have an update soon

[I.was.ink]

i suggest to not put in the horns. that just makes it cliche. Well thats just my opinion of course:rolleyes:

[amphex]

In response to iwasink:
I think you should keep the horns..theres no reason not to I dont think..

[exactpixel]

horn thing, it's up to you if you keep them or not, i think you are coming along greate with this, also the shoooooulders are a little small, then again...

[hotnwormy]

This is looking really good. Can't wait to see the final.

I think that you should add more horns. I think the idea behind a creature such as this is to intimidate. The more horns the better!

[danbucknam]

Thanks guys, I am gonna test it with the horns later tonight. They won't be normal horns however. I am redoing the feet now, don't like how thay turned out above. The new feet are larger and the front legs are longer so he can walk better. They are too short on the images above. Exact: thx.:chug: :evilbat: :chug:

[Waster]

I have a problem with your placement of the horns. To me it seems difficult to eat with them horns blocking for food , maybe you should shape the horn into some sort of grippling/entangling-weapon, probably anything looking like a spike so that it would be able to pin down foes in close proximity to the mouth. Or is that too much unicorn for ya? Well, maybe not. I dont want it to look like a friendly horse.

[danbucknam]

Waster: thx, that was kinda the idea behind the horns. To trap and hold his prey while he feeds, But since you mentioned it too, i might make some adjustments to the final. will post again later tonight.:afro2:

[danbucknam]

http://www.layerten.com/art/beast5.jpg

[danbucknam]

Some new horns, some new feet, aome longer legs. The new feet are still in their early stages. Any thoughts? Kinda a weird camera angle here 20mm lense. thanks for the imput waster:chug:

[exactpixel]

looks awsome, i like the changes that you have made, very exelent! one thing though, the nostrals are a little more "forward" than what you have in the original drawing. I'm not sure if you've changed that direction and decided to make it that way. just an observation, It's looking killa though, can't wait to see it finished. Love the feet as well. :chug:

[danbucknam]

Exact: thanks for pointing that out. Part of that might be the 20mm camera I used for the render but i will adjust that later tonight. :arrow:

[WerxOne]

great model

have you boned it yet ?
it looks like you may have some mesh problems in the crotch area, and i'd break one of his tusks, and make them thicker like you toe nails.

looks like it was fun to build, really look forward to seeing all the peices with it and textured, gonna be pretty

[danbucknam]

I wish I had a model to bone right now! lol

[The_Dude_Abidin]

my favorite part thus far is the concept drawing. The model is started well enough. My only problem is with the creatures face. The drawing has much more character than the model. I think you need to rework the face a little. the sixe is varried more and the snout slopes more. Just stay true to your original design and it will be great.

The Dude