"Brains" [Feb18] *Updated

[Ankh]

http://www.sbnage.com/transfer/fatman-wip.jpg

Feb 17:
Critique, suggestions, etc welcome. Work in progress.
Painting in OpenCanvas 3.0. When I finish, I'll post the event file for a limited time. In the mean time - critique, please.

Feb 18:
Fixed a few inconsistencies. Attempting to flesh out different techniques. I wish I had more experience to play off of. White background removed, as I despise them.

[Devilock138]

right click > save :).

That's hilarous man.

[Cgkoko]

I really love it .....and i would like a T-shirt of it.Only thing i don't like is his butt.

[davi]

I think it looks great, it needs more refinement. the belly looks finished, everything else is still muddy compaired to it.

The plane of the hand(with fork) could be defined more, right now the pinky looks as if it was coming from the wrist.

The shadow on the teeth is way too sharp and looks lasso'd(which is probably what you did).

besides that's it's awesome and hilarious :}

[Hyver]

superbe work!
crits (you asked :) : take another look at the arm holding the coconut, erm skullcap
And do something about that hair honey ;)

great work, keep it up!

[SEVANS]

Finish it!

And just to be fussy - move your signature from out of his arse.

PLUS I agree with Davi about the teeth shadow, soften the edges.