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Chaser226
February 18th, 2004, 12:52 AM
A Dream Sequence short =].

http://www.timtconcepts.com/dsg/ds01.jpg
http://www.timtconcepts.com/dsg/ds02.jpg
http://www.timtconcepts.com/dsg/ds03.jpg
http://www.timtconcepts.com/dsg/ds04.jpg
http://www.timtconcepts.com/dsg/ds05.jpg
http://www.timtconcepts.com/dsg/ds06.jpg
Chaser226
February 18th, 2004, 12:54 AM
http://www.timtconcepts.com/dsg/ds07.jpg
http://www.timtconcepts.com/dsg/ds08.jpg
http://www.timtconcepts.com/dsg/ds09.jpg
http://www.timtconcepts.com/dsg/ds10.jpg

http://www.timtconcepts.com/dsg/ds12.jpg
Famboozled
February 18th, 2004, 02:45 AM
nice storyboard, lol it has its hilarious moments like when that guy gets hit by the bus, J/K nice clean work man, perhaps some color might add more to the atmosphere

keep up the good work
mephisto
February 18th, 2004, 09:20 AM
This is a really cool concept and story. I think it would make an awesome short. I like the juxtoposition of the beeper and the heart monitor. Cool and eery foreshadowing with the bleeding hand. Did you really dream this? Or make it up? Are you going to film/cg/cartoon this?
Chaser226
February 18th, 2004, 01:59 PM
Nope I made it up. But parts like jumping from a nice park by the lake to a city environment is often what happens to me. My dreams go wild. One second i could be in my room next minute i hope my door to disney land. HAhaha.
Chaser226
February 19th, 2004, 06:59 PM
Any more comments or thoughts from others?
molested_cow
February 22nd, 2004, 12:49 AM
Originally posted by Chaser226
http://www.timtconcepts.com/dsg/ds07.jpg
http://www.timtconcepts.com/dsg/ds08.jpg
http://www.timtconcepts.com/dsg/ds09.jpg
http://www.timtconcepts.com/dsg/ds10.jpg

http://www.timtconcepts.com/dsg/ds12.jpg

My thoughts EXACTLY! Perhaps it's the way it's being illustrated. I think you can consider putting more drama to that scene. It will be sterotypical but I think that is the climax of this story board, one frame isn't enough.
EVIL
February 22nd, 2004, 10:25 AM
how the hell did the boy get ran over by the bus when he stands on the sidewalk and the girl moves towards him
Chaser226
February 22nd, 2004, 12:26 PM
lol It was intentional. Dreams are pretty random for me and the bus is supposed to just go for him. Shes not dreaming of what happened.