Artistic Web comic page

[S.R. Braun]

A test page basically for my new artistic webcomic 'Just Fine' about the dayly life of a transgendered, socially en adept, hacker. The dialogue in this was greatly inspired from the music of Current 93

The page symbolizes the characters reluctant transition from one gender identity to another, and how emotionally jarring it is.

http://satatica.net/images/page1justfine.jpg

[DanSTC]

Great work, but if it's trying to be emotional, it seems pretty heavy-handed and altogether too angsty.

Still, I'd really have to see the rest of the pages of the comic to make a clear judgement about it, since I can't tell how well it would work in the context of the story.

[S.R. Braun]

The rest of the pages are a liittle bit less artsy story wise atleast. To potray a story as heavy handed as this it needs to be a little bit more linear and normal .

[S.R. Braun]

a line up of the main characters is my webcomic 'Just Fine' including the two incestuous lolita goth sisters

http://satatica.net/images/jfcharactersht.jpg

[Ezekiel]

looks great. there a url for the comic?

and nice to see berzerker fans S.R. Braun :D

[Teeth]

Looks like it's going well so far. So I heard that the main character is a cross dresser?

[S.R. Braun]

Thank you , and yes, the main character is a cross dresser , I thought it would be facinating to write a story about a character with such an internal struggle . Knowing a few gender intresting people in my time I thought it would be a wonderful idea to portray a story from their point of view.:)

[pogonip]

Looking good man ....wish you success with your web comic :chug: