mr.new with yer average I'm new post

[camus]

http://www.atn-universe.com/staff/camus/-bird+o.gif

http://www.atn-universe.com/staff/camus/-bufalo+o.gif

hope you like em, C&C apreaciated

[keenerbean]

Pretty cool. I like the loose inking style although I think it could stand to be a bit tighter in areas of detail like the face. Both the faces, BTW, have lots of potential. The first makes me think of some demonic clown and the second has a cool mythological feel to it. Also refering to some anatomy books would make them more convincing even if they are fantasy.
Composition is also a big thing for these. I don't know if your scanner's too small (mine sure is) but the cropping pulls your eye off the page. Try to define a line of action before starting any figurative work. The end result will be more unified and rythmical.
Anyway, that's my long winded two bits. Good work.

[camus]

hoooly crap, XD I thought no one would ever reply because of the no-reply sindrome while I kept checking the topic :rolleyes: but this is great, your post is very helpfull, I really apreaciate it....about the composition/cropping deal...do you mean only the buff one? or both? on the buff one I accidentally miss-scanned it...but my scanner aint too small...actually both of these are just like 12x8 cms big...aka 4.8x3.5 inches big....but the buff one IS chopped off, the other one ( I intented to make some kind of mutant with a bird soul with that one) isnt chopped off at all

is the anatomy thing too noticeable? :p I really have to work on that...but I'm always lazy as all I want is creating my little creatures