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Theo
February 16th, 2004, 11:41 AM
These actually took quite some time to make, comin up with the design and all, and thats kinda sad cuz they do look kinda rough:( But Oh well, I like the designs. And to me, thats what matters right now. Either way I'd love your crits on either design or render. shoot!

Btw, no poultry carriers here nu-uh.

My fav is this first one. Could use some perspective fixing though, I know:

http://www.twgrafik.com/site/truckbig2.jpg

And this second one no doubts could use some more details:

http://www.twgrafik.com/site/truckbig3.jpg

Dont like the design here, but the render im real proud of:

http://www.twgrafik.com/site/truckbig.jpg

Thats it for now. Next up, more spaceships! :chug:

-Theo

kapturowski
February 16th, 2004, 12:01 PM
Nice and neat. I really dig the style, whish I could draw mechanical stuff like this. Maybe adding some text or colour to them would liven them up a little, but maybe they a fresh from the factory? Anyway, checked your site also, lots of nice stuff!

-Adam

Theo
February 16th, 2004, 03:25 PM
Ey another swede! Were allover the net arent we:)

Couldnt agree with you more though, they do need living up, color , text etc.. but Ive mainly been putting time into their shape so far. Givin em a good goin over with the colorbrush is a fine idea.

-t

georgem
February 16th, 2004, 05:23 PM
Love them,

I can see the "hargonens" (spelling?) from dune arriving in them.

Theo
February 17th, 2004, 03:09 AM
Now that you mention it, there looks like there are some unintentional harkonnen looks in there, cool:)

Glad you like em.

Here are the sketches that ive painter over, uploaded, just for fun:

http://www.twgrafik.com/site/trucksket2.jpg

-theo

R_M
February 17th, 2004, 03:18 AM
they have a very heavy feel to them well done!

the first one has the more interesting desing, cause it is the most unconventional.

now I am curious to see your space ships

alti
February 17th, 2004, 08:00 AM
awsome work, i remember seeing some of your drone work a while back.
the style is becoming very tight and i think you are good at analysing your own work, any critic i had you preety much summed up in the descriptions.
post some of your roughs in a sketchbook i'd like to see more. :)

SkeletonDog
February 17th, 2004, 02:19 PM
These are awesome! Love the design concepts. Love the scale. Make more...

Loga4
February 17th, 2004, 06:33 PM
Very nice!
Can`t wait to se space crafts!:)

Theo
February 18th, 2004, 02:59 AM
heh It appears I happened to start working on a new truck. So, Sorry guys, might take a while before my superawesome spaceships pop by.

But trust me, this truck is gonna rock. Best of all of em, fixed perspective, more details, more badass.

:chug: cheers to you all!

-theo

tayete
February 18th, 2004, 09:47 AM
Do not touch them any more! They are great.

Scubasteve
February 18th, 2004, 12:12 PM
These are really nice. I like the rendering and it really gives the impression of a weighty metal. I would however refine the lines a little further and maybe make them less think. Good Work!:D

Big Al
February 18th, 2004, 12:15 PM
one observation off the bat: designs 1 & 2 have the feeling that the vehicles are "top heavy" and if they were to drive over a bump on one side of the road, they might tend to tip over. design 3 does not have that feel and therefore appears to be a more stable vehicle. perhaps a redesign of just the wheel structure that more resembles a mars rover type functionality where the wheels have the flexibility to climb over obstacles and still keep the vehicle level?

nice paint technique though(guache like feel)....add a shadow to "ground" it

Theo
February 18th, 2004, 06:29 PM
thanks peoples, Ill try and think about that "tipover" problem, but I enjoy thinking that whatever obstacles it finds, it crushes:)

Workin on the other one as I speak.

-t