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hyperspeed
February 16th, 2004, 10:07 AM
http://www.artwanted.com/images/large/10403_68198.jpg

http://www.artwanted.com/images/large/10403_68199.jpg

http://www.artwanted.com/images/large/10403_68200.jpg

http://www.artwanted.com/images/large/10403_68201.jpg

http://www.artwanted.com/images/large/10403_68202.jpg

i'm trying to improve
give some critics please

Bretton
February 16th, 2004, 10:33 AM
nice sketches i like the stylistic faces.

crits:
try some more dynamic and loose poses. all your characters look very rigid.

study the way clothing hangs on the human form. folds and such

rothgar
February 16th, 2004, 11:22 AM
Above all else keep practicing. Grab some reference material for anatomy and start working on that now to build a better foundation for your figures. You show a nice variety of character types in your work. Keep it up.

hyperspeed
February 16th, 2004, 03:33 PM
i'm doing this to practice my skills.
hope it's going fine in the general.
tell me you guys think.
http://joaosantos.artroof.com/images/4/0/2/3/4/43204fs.jpg

Devilock138
February 16th, 2004, 04:52 PM
Get some sketch pads, keep up the practice. I see potential.