Recent stuff [big d/l]

[kapturowski]

These are my latest paintings/drawings.

First lineart derawing I've done in years. I referenced the pose and lighting from a nude by Loomis. If you're interested, here's the lines (http://w1.501.telia.com/~u50112103/forum/redline.jpg).

http://w1.501.telia.com/~u50112103/illustrationer/red.jpg

The following are for a swedish rpg/computergames/movie magazine.

http://w1.501.telia.com/~u50112103/illustrationer/drake.jpg

http://w1.501.telia.com/~u50112103/illustrationer/barbarax.jpg

http://w1.501.telia.com/~u50112103/illustrationer/train.jpg

All pieces are finished but any c&c is appreciated.

-Adam

[gasmask]

these are pretty cool, im surprized no one has commented.. but there are some problems like the first one the pose feels awkward, the second one has some compostion problems, id say ad more background in and push ur father back things into darkness more, the last 2 are solid i think, so keep up the good work

[Eyal]

the train is terrific, great flow in the composition and the strokes really add to it.
i feel that having the tree closer to the viewer, somewhere in the middle between the vanishing point of the train and the viewer, would help. it hides the end of the train and u cant see the distance

[nardfrog]

the anatomy on the first pic is a little off. The cave pic is very intriguing.

[kapturowski]

gasmask- Thanks. I've always had trouble drawing females and gettting them correct. Maybe I shouldnt have altered the pose from the ref, obviously even small changes can set the balance off :D. The background thing is a pretty serious issue I should adress, to lazy to do it most of the time.

Eyal- I think I'll try that one out, thanks!

nardfrog- So people keep saying ;) (but my mum likes it!) Maybe I should ad some solid ground for her to stand upon?

-Adam